yah man! this is a huge improvement...everything is clear and defined. My only comment would be to vary up the edge quality. Especially the buildings in the back (right now they are all pretty soft) And dont worry about loosing your center of interest, because the composition and contrast makes it pretty obvious. I think you could still push the contrast and internal detail of the buildings as well (especially in the building closest to us.) Also just add more noise and little details to bring it to the next level of completion. Like the large pillar that she is hanging from, you could really get in there and go crazy on the wood-grain detail (maybe even bring in some photo textures)Really nice work though man...I still get pissed when I remember that your 16 haha, keep it up!