Sunday, August 5, 2012


Hey Charles-

Cleaned up some edges and shapes, added a fisherman and some other bg stuff, opaque clouds, etc. You asked me to post it here when I'd finished, so here you go!



  1. i think you need to create more of a separation between foreground, midground and backround. Right now it doesnt really seem like there is a lot of space between those two mountains on the right or the structure in the middle. i think part of it is due to the fact that the mountain in the far background is very detailed, and actually, it has more noise and detail and contrast than the smaller mountain in front of, it, so it kind of tricks the viewers eye into thinking its closer, and i think that's what is flattening it.

  2. I also think there's a huge jump in scale between the human on the right and the human on the boat.