week 2 - critique needed

Hi Guys,

It's Yusuke.
I've been painting but it just looks off. Can you guys help me out?
thank you.

TIna Oh - Week 2

Edit:

I re-uploaded the 5 thumbnails.  3 thumbnails were slightly changed just today, but for some reason I'm not satisfied with the overalls.

Two thumbnails below are new.  I think I like the third thumbnail the best out of four...  I'll use it for the final work.

Edit:

Final Work:

Not exactly what I had in mind...

Any feedback is appreciated.

Kirby wk1

[week 1] Lucas

thumbz

Week 1 Hwk

which one? -_-

Week 1 Homework - Justin